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雅思写作学习笔记(一):动态图

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一、相关描述词汇

Up:rise,go up,grow,growth,increase

Down:decline,go down,decrease,drop,fall

Same:stay the same,remain constant

Up and down:fluctuate,fluctuation,go up and down

Up or down more slowly:

steadily,steady,gradually,gradual,slightly,slight,minor

Up or down quickly:

Rapidly,rapid,suddenly,sudden,sharply,sharp,significant,significantly,dramatically,dramatic,steeply,steep,major

Preposition of time:

In(+month/season/year/decade/century)

For(a period of time)

By(before or at a specific point in time)

Until(up to a certain point)

From...to.../between...and...

Before/after(+point in time)

Around(+period of time or point in time)


二、如何分析一张动态图

1. 动态图类型:table, bar chart, pie chart, line graph

2. 以数据为主进行分析

数据分析的重要性排名(准确描述--清楚分析):

数据= 趋势 (必须要写)> 排名 (优先考虑1st/ 2nd > the least)> 分数和倍数 


三、范文赏析及仿写

1、如何规划文章:

coherence and cohesion(连贯性和凝聚力)

(1)量大-量小;量小-量大;差距大-差距小;差距小-差距大

(2)每句话之间都要有明确的关联

(3)使句子间有关联度的方法:

    1)确定分类:按分数高低分  2)反复强调分类:

a.- with + 比较级 取决于你的对象

(with lower band / with worse performance )

b.强调其他的方向:用差距/趋势-doing来连缀句子


*如何替换漂亮的比较级:思考题目的比较对象

如:学生的成绩: weaker – poorer – better

商品的价格:more expensive, cheaper


【例文】


IELTS candidates in Mainlanddid the best in reading, as their band gradually increased from 6.11 to 6.27 over this period.Withslightly lower grade, Listening was the part where test-taker got about 5.9 in the first three years, but in 2021, this figure rose to 6.04.Compared with previous sectors, candidates wereeven weaker in writing.In 2017, candidates only got 5.37 in writing in average, but after that it grew quicker than all other sectors, reaching 5.76 and it was not the worst one.By contrast, staying almost the same, the figure for Speaking was just 5.4 in the first three years, and after that it just rose a little to 5.55.

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